Archive for ◊ April, 2009 ◊

Secrets of a Ghostwriter II
Sunday, April 19th, 2009 | Author:

I finished it.
The last draft of the 2nd edition of Secrets of a Ghostwriter training manual is done and off to four different editors for input and corrections. Already gotten some feedback from them, so had to share.

From Wendy Elliott-Scheinberg, Ph.D., California State University, Fullerton (CSUF):
This book is wonderful. I can definitely use the nonfiction section in my class.

From Cora Foerstner, Program Advisor McNair Scholars, Cal Poly University Pomona:
Your book will be the seminal text, the standard for all ghostwriters, established pros and neophytes. Your system is a gold mine.

From Bera Dordoni, N.D.:
This is truly a work of art. A masterpiece. A bible for the ghostwriter. Stunning, my dear, simply brilliant, extensive, more in depth than I could have imagined –
the humorous presentation keeps it alive and exciting.

Okay, so that last one is from my sister-by-love but as we all know, a sister’s honesty can go either way. Frankly, I think she likes the book.

Now all I have to do is wait for 1-1/2 more sets of corrections, then input everything, get the proposal to my agent, and … do several million other things to get ready for the panel discussion I’m doing May 2, the new Ghostwriter Training term starting May 11, and the maybe online GT class I’m thinking of doing–no URL for that one yet, but you can see all the particulars for Ghostwriter Training AND the online Before Copy Editing by clicking on the links in the left column.

So I finished … and now the real work begins. This is what aspiring authors need to realize: once the manuscript is done and polished, the truly hard stuff starts. The stuff no writer enjoys doing or feels they’re good at, but that makes all the difference in getting the book to press and to the public.

And so, I begin.

Questions? Call 1-800-641-3936

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Critique Groups and Editors
Wednesday, April 15th, 2009 | Author:

I love critique groups. I go to two, sometimes three, all the time. I enjoy the camaraderie, the exchange of ideas, the push-and-pull of writers in a community.

But a critique group is not a substitute for an independent editor.

Critique groups are there to give us encouragement, to point out obvious flaws, to brainstorm ideas, to provide the underlying support necessary to live “the writer’s life.” A chapter-by-chapter critique from a handful of divergent voices cannot take the place of a focused analysis by a detached professional who knows what he or she is looking for–i.e., deal breakers–and how to correct them.

I don’t have enough fingers and toes to count the number of authors who have assured me they only needed a copy edit because their critique group had already been over it (and loved it, of course), yet when I read the first three chapters I knew it needed serious revision to be considered viable. I wish I could say that many of them went on to fame and fortune without those revisions, but sadly, I cannot.

Substantive and line editors don’t edit a manuscript in individual chapters; they review the entire work first for over-all slinky flow, plausibility, cohesiveness, and continuity. First they correct deal-breaking content errors, THEN they go on to converting passive/static voice to active prose and excessive author narration to character action and dialogue. Only after all that has been fixed do they plunge into syntax, grammar, punctuation, and those other niceties that wrap up the package. Why worry about commas in a passage that needs to be rewritten?

Critique groups are invaluable; I highly recommend them and will never not attend one. But if you want what you’ve slaved over all these months and years to sell, remember: editors may not be priceless, but they’re usually worth far more than they cost.

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